It's got a really nice melody actually. Needs some more work, needs to be touched up. You might be interested; get the "Itchy and Scratchy" synth pack, specially for dubstep. You'll like 'em. Check out my dubstep song; I made my first one, finally. :P Keep it up; don't get discouraged if you can't get something right; Such is life and such is music.
It's not too bad
First and foremost, the genre is labeled wrong. This is definitely NOT trance.
Secondly, that is a good thing. This submission gets repetitive quickly, so I'd suggest just working with expanding your musical ideas more. Equalization's getting better, need better kick drum sounds. Keep it up.
it's almost too chill; but it's an enjoyable listen. you need sharper equalization. Other than that, can't really name any complaints.
Yeah, I will in my next song.
Make your lead a bit sharper, make your drums heavier. Good stuff otherwise, very unique composition.
I'll definately look back at this song some day to maybe master it abit better but for now, it does the job for me. Thanks for your words.
Turn those drums up
drums are too soft for this type of music. Turn them up, crank up the bass on the kick. Make the snare more snappy. other than that, pretty okay.
Good idea, I'll get on it.
I love the atmosphere created by this. Sakura? really? Didn't know that program could sound this good. anyway, keep it up. The bass is awesome; my subwoofer vibrated the entire house and scared my cat. Thanks brah. :P
Thanks brah :P
Yeah, Sakura is a really underrated program. Although it's only really good for stuff like this in my opinion. it's standard string tones are pretty lacking :/
Sorry about you're cat haha.
very interesting, not too bad at all
my main complaint is that there is a bit of audio clipping; you might want to use a compressor or more compression, or a limiter in the future. Very well composed, very interesting listen overall. I like how dark the song as a whole feels and sounds. Interesting, unexpected synth choices, besides the obvious synth bass.
see if you can get higher quality snare sounds; but that's my personal preference. Keep it up.
Yeah I think you're right, can you tell me more about compression or limiters in a pm? Didn't heard of it...
hm.. not too bad at all
I personally would suggest that you double your rapping at certain parts, and as for your clean vocals, they aren't too bad but they definitely could be improved on. Try a higher octave if you can.
I like the song overall, and I like the lyrics, and the beat is pretty good. Of course, my criticisms are only suggestions. Keep up the work man. Been a while since I checked any of your stuff.
Definitely man. Flow needs to be more dynamic. Thanks!
This melody sounds familiar... TOO familiar.
Eh. It's okay. Definitely nothing impressive, but a a few sections in here sound EXACTLY the same as several of MY tracks. Coincidence? Perhaps. Either way, you have potential.. you really just need to put more effort into your tracks.
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