It's got a really nice melody actually. Needs some more work, needs to be touched up. You might be interested; get the "Itchy and Scratchy" synth pack, specially for dubstep. You'll like 'em. Check out my dubstep song; I made my first one, finally. :P Keep it up; don't get discouraged if you can't get something right; Such is life and such is music.
It's not too bad
First and foremost, the genre is labeled wrong. This is definitely NOT trance.
Secondly, that is a good thing. This submission gets repetitive quickly, so I'd suggest just working with expanding your musical ideas more. Equalization's getting better, need better kick drum sounds. Keep it up.
it's almost too chill; but it's an enjoyable listen. you need sharper equalization. Other than that, can't really name any complaints.
Yeah, I will in my next song.
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